Roald Dahl describes pear drops as having a "dangerous taste" because they "smelled of nail varnish and froze the back of your throat." Describe one particular type of candy using this kind of imagery. Write a few sentences which show about your choice of candy and appeal to my sense of sight, taste, touch, hearing, and/or smell. Friday, February 4, 2011
Using Imagery to Describe
Roald Dahl describes pear drops as having a "dangerous taste" because they "smelled of nail varnish and froze the back of your throat." Describe one particular type of candy using this kind of imagery. Write a few sentences which show about your choice of candy and appeal to my sense of sight, taste, touch, hearing, and/or smell. 
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
32 comments:
War heads, the smell of fear. The taste is powerful, mind blow and your eyes cant help but twitch. They come in small packages but and are round, they come in all different mind blowing colors. War heads are firecrackers that go of right when hitting for tounge.
A scrumplidumcious snicker bar!
A scrumplidumsious snicker bar is the sweet sensation that blesses your mouth. The gooy and putty like jelly from one end to the other is like the magic that awaits. While having half a dozen choclate brownie nuts awaiting to be slaubered by 5 year olds.
By:Amir Khairalla
the mr.goodbar, the semi-sweet flavor blast that explodes in your mouth as if fireworks on the 4th of july, its peanut and chocoate combo forms an encreadably satisfieing candy that is absolutly earisistable.
By: Carly LeBlanc 216
Sour gummy worms. The rush of sugar in your mouth mixed with the flavorful candy. They are long and squishy: coated with delicious sugar. Sour gummy worms are neon bright colors. Every now and then they gat stuck in your teeth and are a pain to get out. But over all they are scruptious and a terrific sugary treat.
-Josephine Bowen 215
A kit-kat bar. The deliciousness of that gooey, creamy milk chocolate cover with the crunch of the crisp, irresistible wafer inside. It all leaves you in a mess, but not being able to stop eating the explosion of irresistible goodness. It's like a bomb of sugar, spice, and everything nice went off in your mouth, and it left behind the goodness
of a creamy, soothing after taste.
-Cassia Lockwood
TWIX, Twix, twix...OH MY!
The thin chocolate shell disguises the delicious taste of sweet, sticky caramel and crunchy cookie bar. Twix provides the perfect combination of texture when you bight it: crunchy; gooey; delectable. Twix is perfect for delighting your taste buds. The sweet taste of chocolate mingles with that stretchy caramel.
Also, it only has like 30g of saturated fat and only about 400 calories! No, really, it only has 9g of saturated fat and 250 calories. Healthy, right?
*I only know this because I just ate one - not because this is common knowledge* - Im awesome
The classic candy cane is a sensational taste that explodes in your mouth with icy flavor.When you take the wrapper off, a smell of mint mouthwash, or maybe even cool breeze toothpaste, washes over you. The hook-shaped sweet has diagonal stripes, and a licensed challenge. Who can go the longest without breaking the curve? We hang them on trees, we eat them endlessly, but either way, a candy cane is the old, beloved sweet we all know.
~shaye (:
The delightful taste of rainbow colored skittles melting on your tongue. It's like the world's most luscious rainbow sherbet exploding in your mouth.
By:Gina Cucchiara
The Reese's peanut butter cup.
The reese's peanut butter cup is the earisistable taste of chocolate and peanut butter put together.The size is a small circle,thats plasterd over with delecious hard chocolate.Inside is a smooth and thick layer of mouth watering peanut butter, just waiting to be devoured within seconds.And, because the taste is so good, you end up eating more and more.
By: Taylor Hall
Starburst!
Juicy, fruity flavors exploding in your mouth from just a bite size square.Watering your mouth and having your taste buds jumping. Packaged in a long rectangular paper casing and individual colored paper squares. Your first bite will have you eating another until you get to the bottom of the package and end up buying more fruity explosions.
- Jillian
Starburst!
Juicy, fruity flavors exploding in your mouth from just a small bite size square.Watering your mouth and making your taste buds jump. Packaged in a rectangular paper casing and wrapped in individual colored squares. Once you have one bite you will want another until you get down to the bottom of the package.Causing you to buy another fruity explosion.
-Jillian
"Squish", "Squish", "Squish": the sound of somebody chomping their jaws sore on some sweedish fish. I turn around to see a smile blooming on their face. I can imagine the bright taste of strawberry goodness overflowing your mouth. The best part though, is, when you think the mouthful of sweetness is over you find one last hunk of it stuck in your toot. Ahhhhhh the joys of sweedish fish.....
Sam LaChcance
Mmmm Junior Mints, The small, delicious chocolate candy. When you open the box, you can smell the sweet sensation they hold. Serving size, 12, oh you cant help yourself, you eat the whole box. Every scrumtious peice, melting in your mouth, that mysterious minty flavlor leaves you wanting more. Who knew bite size candy could be so irresistible. When the box is gone, you wish you had saved some for later.
-Brianna Babineau
The sour skittles.
Sour skittles is the dangerous circled pieces of candy. The sour part has this tangy taste that can sting your mouth for days, sometimes it can leave a little scare so you wont forget it just like their buddies the sour patches.This part makes you want to taste more of the little sour bugs.But when you get past the first level the sweet enjoyable part has come and it makes you feel like you had just seen the rainbow and slid down it and you found a pot of gold at the end.
By:Aaliyha Baldwin
Chocolate Covered Raisins
This delectable treat explodes with flavor in my mouth while they melt in my mouth making me want more. They feel like smooth pebbles at the bottom of the pond. The sweet aroma of the chocolate lingers in the air making you wish you had more. It looks like a tiny scoop of delicious chocolate ice cream on an ice cream cone. The raisins sound like an acorn hitting the roof of my house when ever I drop one. -Liam Celuzza
Biting into that milk chocolate Hershey bar made my mouth just water even more. It was like I was in a whole new world...a milky, heavenly, new world. The smell was hypnotizing, playing with my nose, making me want more. I looked at the perfectly shaped bar my hands were holding. Melting in my hand;it just shows how milky it is. Each piece perfectly shaped with HEARSHEYS etched on each perfectly tiny piece. only 11 more pieces...mmmmmm I sweetly devoured the rest all in one bite.
War Heads~
The taste of war heads is sensational. When hits the tip of your tongue your eyes start to burst with water. You face becomes so red because of the sour, sweet, delicous taste. It feels as if you have fireworks exploding in your mouth.
~Maia Murray
KIT-KAT BARS
Crunching after munching, snapping after biting, then a rush of magnificent chocolate flavor attacks your tongue. The scent of the chocolate, the slimy touch. Beginning to water your mouth slowly moves toward its prey. CRUNCH!
By: Scott Christensen
War heads, when i hear these words i think of the deadly candy that makes your eyes water, your throught burn and your tounge feel like somebody has set it on fire. But you keep popping them in your mouth because you want to experience the thrill one more time.
-Ashley McSweeney
I love Hershey's bars. smooth milk chocolate surface that melts on my tongue.
by liam R.
Juicy Chewy Twizzlers Twists. Edidble candy straws that come in flavors cherry and strawberry. The middle is hollow, but the ends are sealed, so you have to bite of both ends before it is an actual straw. Once both ends are open, you can use the twizzler as a straw. When you are finished drinking, you can eat the twizzler!
-Natalie Proctor
Skittles, every bite has a unique flavor. Each little bag is like a pocket sized rainbow with an array of colors. As the skitles slowly disapear and leave you with nothing but an empty bag your mouth feels full of colorful and delicouse flavors.
~Michaela Guillette
~Reeses
When the chocolate lands on your tounge it tastes like a creamy heaven! The way the chocolate swirls and melts into penut butter is mouthwatering and delicious. When its gone you feel as if you just came back from a whole different world!
-By:Heather Hunt
Sour Patch Kids...The perfect blend of sweet and sour. First minute a delight of fruity yummy lusciousness. Then comes a quick but very powerful punch of tangy amazingness.....pure heaven.
~Elena Arciprete
What is that awesome smell?? Could it be lollipops? No. Skittles?? Doubt it. I know! Caramel Candy, that sweet smell of honey, as though it was just off a tree. An amazing texture of smoothe rock that you'd wanna skip across a lake. Hey, the taste isn't too bad either. The name kind of gives it away, but I'll tell you anyways. It tastes of golden caramel that had just come out of the factory. YUM!
-Paul Barrett
Devouring the thin wax wrappings surounding the small roll of goodness. Sinking my two front teeth into a deep chocolate ecomba. Letting the feel of the delectablecandy invade my mouth like a tiney sugary army. allowing the delacase slide down my throught in to the cavity of my stomach. Making it feel the need for just one more.
- Henry Demers
kit-kat bars
There it is.The moment i have b een waiting for, the moment to eat a Kit-Kat bar.I ran to the candy store as quick as i could and immediately, the smell of sugar contents smacked me in the face.Soon I approached it, the anxeity was killing me.i slowly unwrapped it, crinkling in my hand. The texture,was so smooth,like a marble floor.i took a small but,crunch,crunch,crunch and soon cam an explosion of chocolate-waffer flavor so rich and warm. the smell snuck into my nose making my eyes and mouth water. It was touture not to save every bite.Soon the Kit-Kat bar was nothing but a wrapper.
by:joey lutter
Hershies cookies and cream,
have a very irresistible taste. With the white choclate and the little cookie crunchies all in the bar. Together, they make a perfect taste.
oh pretzels are scrumptious alright, but with the mouth watering taste of chocolate combined with the slight crunch of a pretzel, M&M's are better then ever! As soon as you impatiently slit the cerulean bag open with a sudden force, the rainbow chocolate-pretzels soar across the ivory room and plummet to the mango colored slate with a werrrrrrrrr!
-Andrew Gardner-
a.k.a. -the awesome kid
jolly ranchers, the flavor pact little log of candy that melt in your mouth, as soon as they touch your tounge you are punched with flavor~MATTCHEW REESE!!!!!!!! :P
The tempting urge to forefill your mouth with a sour explosion. The agony to reunite your taste buds with compelling satisfaction. First comes the sour rush that makes you flinch, then comes the brief moment were your eyes water tempting your to spit them out. Your mouth tells you not to eat another but your mind forces you to test your ability unwilling the sourness makes you pull at your hair as if there was no tommarow. your taste buds have have enough for one day.
The tempting urge to forefill your mouth with a sour explosion The agony to reunite your taste buds with compelling satisfaction. First comes the sour rush that makes you flinch, then comes the brief moment were your eyes water tempting you to spit them out. Your mouth tells you not to eat another but your mind forces you to tes your ability. Unwilling the sourness makes you pull at your hair as if there was no tommarow. Luckily your tase buds have had enough.
- Olivia Gilmore
Post a Comment