Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Candy Exploded Moments

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52 comments:

Annica Scott said...

"Pear drops were exciting because they had a dangerous taste. They smelled of nail varnish, and they froze the back of your throat."
-Roald Dahl

Anonymous said...

A 10 year old boy having tea with Mrs. Worchester? My mom wanted me to suffer. Mrs. Worchester was the craziest lady on the block. She always wore that same, faded yellow bandana around her neck that always smelled like plums and cheap perfume. On "special occasions" , she wore an old floral blouse with different colored buttons that had a rip in the armpit, along with her short jean skirt that had been awfully bedazzled in the back pocket. Her hair looked as if a flock of birds were living in it! She had paint and old coffee coating her hands like a pair of gloves. I was supposed to drink tea made by those hands? No way!
-Leah Sowerbutts

Anonymous said...

I krinkle the wrapper as I pry out my sweet. The cherry red lollipop glisons and gleams in the light. I pop the lolly into my mouth as quickly as a woman runs when they see a mouse. The perfect taste enters, it's like I entered the trance of candy. I bite down with my teeth now with cavities all over. I take out my change to buy one more tooth destroyer, to see that I bought the last one. -Rachel Drasser

Anonymous said...

As I pop the sweet candy into my mouth, I am filled with the sweet taste. The sweet taste of the hard shell surrounds the main event. The best part of the whole candy lays inside, shielded by the layer of colourful goodness. I bit into it revealing what's inside, the most tastiest candy of all.
-Nick Hall

Anonymous said...

The luscious aroma of green apple filled my nose, as I brought the green, hard, sugary treat to my roughly chapped lips. As it entered the darkness of my mouth, the bittersweet taste danced on my taste buds. I smiled in satisfaction, as the slippery, yet sticky pop glided around my mouth.

-Gabby

Anonymous said...

The hard outer shell came crashing down on to my taste buds, leaving a trail of fiery red, orange, and sun yellow skittles. As I viciously chomp on the delicious pieces of candy, looking as if a red pen exploded in my mouth, I enjoy every single piece that startles my tongue. Each piece consists of a fruity flavor, and sour after taste. Who doesn't like a good skittle once and a while, I know I don't.

-Lilly Holman

Anonymous said...

The sweet smell of chocolate filled my nose and I dreamed about candy mountains surrounding me as I ran threw the colorful candy as I take handfuls of green, yellow and red skittles.
From Max Bigelow

Anonymous said...

As I bite into the cold, delicate, wonderful, squishy Reese's peanut butter cup, I taste the chocolate explosion in my mouth and the peanut butter calms it down with its delicious soothing amazingness. When I open my eyes after I swallow, I wish I had more to feast on.

-Robert Kelley

Anonymous said...

As I peel the wrapper, the most excellent scent of sweetness is released into the air, making my mouth water. The muffled crunch of my chewing echoes through my head. Heaven's gates opened when the chocolate went on to my taste buds.

~Liam Asselin

Anonymous said...

The bumpy feeling when you first put it into your mouth, like the bumps on the side of the road. Once you feel it against your tongue, you make a sour face because of it. Your friends think you hate it by the look on your face, but you want more once you finish it. The more you eat, the more sores grow onto your innocent tongue. You want to stop eating them, but you cannot resist. You need more. The look of the candy doesn't impress me, but the taste most certainly does. Most certainly...

Olivia Mankiewicz

Anonymous said...

I quickly tore off the top of the package, revealing the wondrous rocks. I slowly tilted the package upside down. The waterfall of rocks flowed into my mouth. As they hit my tongue they surprised with a startling pop,pop,pop. They bounced around my mouth as fast as kids running for ice cream. My tongue was tingling and it wouldn't stop. Get these out of my mouth, I thought. I tried water but the outcome was like someone eating a million bags of candy. Rockets were going of inside my mouth. I viciously destroyed the rocks as I crunched my teeth together. Ahhhh at last the rockets were gone and all that remained was the sweet smell of watermelon.
-Victoria Bowen

Anonymous said...

Bursting through the doors of the candy store I immediately go on a safari looking for my favorite candy, Jolly Ranchers. I stand in awe when I find a mountain of them. I grab a handful of different flavors. I open my hand and see the many bright and exuberant colors. Finally, after all the negotiating in my head I chose to eat the blue one first. I quickly unravel the wrapper and partake of the candy. The flavor was so scrumptious I quickly devoured it.

- Cameryn LeShane

Anonymous said...

The sweet and syrupy taste fills my mouth, while the fabulous smell of sugary goodness shutdown my mind. These candy's of crystallized maple syrup look like beautiful brown snowflakes on a warm sunny day. The razor sharp ends of my white teeth crunch down, exploding my tonsils with flavor. Happiness rains down on me. As the flavorful candy sticks to my fingers, the vibrant, sugary taste dazzles my impatient mouth.
-David Gardner

Anonymous said...

Mr. Q, also known as Captain Control freak, owned the most fantastic and exhilarating candy shop on the block. But sadly, as water and fire don't mix, neither does Mr. Q and children. Back when a handful of candy was worth only a penny, my friends and I would open the door to that candy shop every evening after school. Hearing the sound of the bell on the top of the door would awake Mr. Q from his slumber. As he peeled his face off of the counter, you could hear a sound similar to velcro. It was most likely his drool acting as an adhesive to his face, but the seventh graders used to think he had a rat that re-velcroed his size eleven-hundred sneakers. Mr. Q would yell at us kids,"Hurry up! You should know what you're going to get before you track all this dirt into my store!" Bet the fact was that half the time, we weren't even in there to buy candy. You know how I said that the store was exhilarating? The reason for that was because of the secret back room…
-Catherine Swift

Anonymous said...

The man paced nervously back and forth, as if he hadn't the slightest goal, quest, or desire in his long, ancient life. His short, scraggly, wired beard was quite obviously portraying it had been neglected, like a stray dog, for a long time. Like a child walking through a thin woven spider web, his face lingered with disgust. Each time he passed, a heavy cloud of smoke lagged behind. His filth covered jeans were raised a few inches above his pale, bony ankles. It was not his careless appearance that discomforted most children, but his everlasting look of guilt and mystery that rested ever-so vigorously upon his drooped face.

-Alizah Raboin

Anonymous said...

The sweet, crunch of carmel around a nice, ripe, tart, juicy red apple. The waterfall of flavors burst my tastebuds as if the delaticable treat exploded in my mouth causing a wild radiation of flavors run rampid in my mouth.

-Zachary Pearson

Anonymous said...

I grabbed A few bits and through them in my mouth pop pop kizzel. My mouth was going crazy, went nom, and that I made sense of it all.I didn't know if I liked it or not so I tried it once more. It was a feeling I will never for get when the little rocks hit my tong once agen the popping of them felt like a explosion in my mouth.
Matthew Moore

Anonymous said...

My teeth sank into the red, fish-shaped chunk of sugary, gummy candy. The treat exploded with an immense burst of flavor that slowly decrescendoed to a lighter taste. The mild sweetness lingered in the depths of my "Pie Hole" providing the chance to appreciate the pure beauty and genius of this mixture of sugar, corn syrup and modified corn starch. But all was for not, as the delectable sweet was now gone, never to be recovered. I scrounged the insides of my mouth for anything left of the treat... There was none. There was a hole, never ending it seemed, inside of me after the last of the candy had been finished off. I looked for something to take my mind off of the ever-growing longing inside me, but to no avail. Finally, after almost thirty seconds of searching, my expedition of the eyes proved successful, for there was another bag of Swedish Fish in the kitchen.

-Caleb Rawlinson

Anonymous said...

Cow Tales
Nimble fingers grasp the white plastic wrapper covered with the orange and brown mini logos. The tips of your fingers tear the jagged ends of the wrapper down like your zipper. Soft, light-brown caramel, lightly sprinkled with powdered sugar like a spring shower, sprinkling down on the darkest and most squishy mud. But once your teeth dig through the caramel layer, you were brought to a white sugary filling, so soothing, so sweet, so much better than the caramel. You would chomp all the way down the candied sweet, until there was nothing left. You want more. You instantly split the next wrapper, time after time, until you sniff nothing but empty plastic wrappers.
Emily Whitcomb

Anonymous said...

I tore the corner of the yellow fun-sized bag, that read "sour patch kids" across the front. As I put it into my mouth, the sugar coated candy slightly stung my taste buds with sourness. Once all the sugar is sucked off, I bit into it, a soft gummy with a fruity flavor. Once I swallowed it, I reached into the bag for another.
-Chantelle

Anonymous said...

My teeth slowly sink into the gooey softness that is my Milky Way bar. The chocolaty factory smell stings my nose as my teeth continue to be swallowed by the quick sand between the two struggling pieces of candy. I pull my mouth away to try to break off the piece, but the sweet, sticky caramel stuck between the two layers of chocolate only grows longer and thinner as I pull. It is like a sagging bridge between two mountains that will soon be destroyed by the wrecking ball that is my mouth and hungry taste buds.
-Kaylyn

Anonymous said...

As I delicately place the candy in my mouth, the sugary crystals covering the outside dance around my tongue. Each piece of sugar makes a firework go off in my mouth. The fruity, chewy goodness lays beneath the tart flavor, waiting to be discovered. When I finally reach the sweet center, I lick my lips in satisfaction. Sour then sweet, the most wonderful candy of all.

-Elizabeth

Anonymous said...

As I slowly slip a Sour Patch Kid out of the wrapper, my mouth waters. I then throw the sweet candy into my mouth. The sour, the sweet, the blue raspberry, takes my mouth on the trip of a lifetime. My taste buds pop with sugar filled fun. My tongue thanks me with the bursting favors that transfer through my brain and show beautiful colors.

<-Alex Archambeault->

Anonymous said...

The bright red Twizzlers bag crinkles violently as I struggle to open it, ripping the tear strip on the back off instead of open. When I finally manage to open the bag the sweet smell overwhelms my nose and I let out a sigh of relief. I pull one of the cherry flavored strands of licorice out of the cluster and thrust the end into my mouth. I clamp my front teeth into the candy and pull back, my head jerking when it breaks free. This candy will be the death of me.
-Jimmy L.

Anonymous said...

The extremely powerful urge that reals you in like a fish or drags you like a magnet. Crunch, the inside goes as you bite down past the heavenly, rich chocolate coating. Enjoying the richness of the chocolate, almost disappearing to a vacant island of your own paradise. That is until all of it is gone...

-Jillian DeFrancesco

Anonymous said...

Smooth, creamy peanut butter engulfed with chocolate begins to melt instantly on my pink mountain of taste buds. Waves of flavors crash down on me like the salty water of an ocean. The golden wrapper tumbles to the ground unnoticed, while the heaven that I am currently in pulls me from my previous spot on the earth. My blanket of an eyelid flutters closed, savoring every sweet flavor I am gifted with. My greedy little fingers scrabble for more, but my irises stay frozen shut. Hands groping for a delicious getaway, I realize that all good things must come to end for another great one to begin. The beautiful taste fades to a memory, and I am left with a only a young girl and the golden ticket of a Reese's.
-Bailey Klingaman

Anonymous said...

As I grab a sour patch kid out of it's plastic prison, sugar that was on the gummy fell off, so what's left of it fell back where it came from. I drop my prisoner into the entrance of the tunnel to the dungeon. The sourness fills my mouth as I start ripping the prisoner to tiny bits. When I swallow, what is left of the poor thing, it begins it's adventure to the dungeon.
-Meghan Conroy :)

Anonymous said...

I capture the newly purchased pack of sweets from the beat-up counter. Opening the battered door to the bitty shop, I hop step by step on the granite stairs to the footpath. I viciously rip open the packet of confectioneries and pinch one of the gummy, crimson candies. Delicately placing the sweetmeat in my mouth, I exhale into a precise rainbow of flavors.
A particular tang spreads across my taste buds as if it was a turbulent beach shore that fancies the high-tide.
My fangs unmercifully slash the the innocent viscid of a fish. The sweet gummy disintegrates in my viscous saliva. Remains of the candy remain of my teeth. I sense of joy was finally found in my day.

-Amy J.

Anonymous said...

I pick up the bar and stare at the wrapping. Those silver letters gleaming in my eyes. The excitement can't hold on any longer. I tear open the brown wrapping. The color gives me a short but sweet preview of what is to come. As I reveal the chocolate goodness, I bite down on the bar and I am transported to another dimension as I bask in glory of this chocolate. I hear the snap of the crisp candy as I swallow another amazing piece. I feel the chocolate resting on my teeth, having a parade on my tonsoles. I hope that parade continues, as I do not want it to end.

-Brendan Daly

Matthew Thrston said...

As I shoved the wet juicy candy bar in my wet mouth. It felt like I was going to die in candy heaven while I sucked on the long bar smacking my lips. I love candy just like I love my awesome dog(Rosie). When I eat this delicious candy bar I feel like I'm in candy heaven dancing with a Butter Finger. As I look at the candy bar I examine it to see how mick goodness is left and I say, "Yes lots left to eat". When I am eating a candy bar I am a whole other person
-Matthew Thurston

Anonymous said...

Eating a jolly rancher lollipop is like eating a jolly rancher itself, but without the lollipop stick. Once you put it in your mouth, you never want to take it out. It's stuck in your mouth until your done with the lollipop. If you take it out you lose all the flavor that's left behind in her mouth. The sour, juicy flavor on that jolly rancher left behind is going to be the biggest mistake of your life. If you touch any part of the jolly rancher its going to be sticky. How sticky you ask, really sticky. As sticky as gum when it sticks to the bottom of a table. It's what you would all expect out of a jolly rancher pop. The lollipop stick acting as a dagger and killing all life that could've been in that jolly rancher. A green, sour, Granny Apple jolly rancher that's what I like to get the taste of.

-Chris Costich

Anonymous said...

I heard a soft crunch as my teeth bit down on the yellow, orange, and vibrant red skittles. As I continued chewing, my taste buds picked out the slightly sour lemon, the sweet orange, and the powerful cherry flavors. I repeat this process with each flavor. Lime, lemon, orange, cherry, and grape fill my mouth until sadly, my skittles are gone and I continue on with my day hoping to get more skittles tomorrow...
~ Melinda Cormier

Anonymous said...

Mmhmm, snickers, my favorite candy. I slowly bring the delicious candy to my anxious mouth. I lick my chapped lips in excitment. As the candy gets closer and closer to my mouth, my teeth bite into the tasty treat. Instantly my is filled with flavors. Its rich milk chocolate sothes my throat. Its chunky nuts, crunch and snap as my teeth devoier it like a lion snacking on a fresh peice of meat. Its sticky carmel melts into liquid in my warm mouth. As I reach the end of the delightful candy, I feel a sense of disapointment, and crave for another.
~Caitlin Cappucci

Anonymous said...

As I poured the bag of sour skittles into my mouth like a waterfall tumbling straight down into the prepared lake or river, flavor of a variety of sorts clasped my tastebuds and jabbed at my cheek. My teeth stomped and grinded the candy like a hammer on metal or a spinning stone on blade. The sour divided from the candy itself like Jewish families in world war 2 but would happily end up together in the same place. In this case, that place was my stomach. -Nick Huntington

Anonymous said...

As I bite into the supple piece of candy, my mind blows away. The fermented covering surrounding the sweetened center of the Candie is distinctive. As I gnaw the candy again it wedges on to my pearly whites that are soon going to decay into a void in my bridgework. As I expose my mouth to the world, the tacky piece of candy plucks away from my teeth. I gulp down the rest of the candy and think. That's sweet then sour.

-Joshua G.

Anonymous said...

I walked into the brightly decorated store admiring the colorful jars of candy. My eyes found their way to what I wanted, a kit kat. I bought the kit kat and opened the wrapper. I took it out of the wrapper and sank my teeth into the crunchy candy bar. I tasted the delicious chocolate and the wonderful wafer. It tasted like I was in heaven. But then I finished the heavenly kit kat and continued on with my day.

Declan FitzPatrick

Anonymous said...

I speedily unwrapped the bar with enthusiasm, and happiness in my smile. The gold of the wrapper split away to show the caramel, chocolate, crunchiness that was a Twix bar. I raised it too my mouth and took a bite. First the crunch, and then the caramel, and chocolate taste cascaded over my mouth like an avalanche. Then I stopped smiling and noticed that I ate the entire thing.

By: Cole J

Anonymous said...

As the little boy entered the candy shop, he immediately turned to the tall shelf of candy to admire all of the amazing decisions. He reached in a large jar and grabbed a smooth, green Gobstopper. He took the delicious sugary ball and threw it into his mouth. It was sour, yet sweet. A very unusual combination of taste, but it was wondrous. He took it out of his mouth, and it was orange in the midst of becoming red. The Gobstopper was absolutely tremendous. It changed color, it had an unusual combination of taste. The most amazing part was it seemed to last forever. -Luke D.

Anonymous said...

Fizzing sugar-sweet tufts of luscious technicolor clouds, as if plucked from the inner gates of Heaven itself, burst into a sensation of confetti and sparklers showering over my taste buds, grabbing at the electrifying flavor like children snatching at bubbles. The thrilling chemical reaction is a light-show, and causes the delicate threads to swell up like the waves of the sea with the flourish, flick, and, furl of my tongue. The magic show gradually ends in one last grand finale, vanishing if a smokey-smooth puff down my throat, a cliche, yet so warm and melancholy as it leaves me sullen and mystified. On the last swallow, I find its calling card, a faint aftertaste reminiscent of a honeyed dream out of my reach. I close my eyes to hold the suspense and let myself savor it, chasing that dream to the very end.

-Jill Le

Anonymous said...

As I open the wrapped piece of paper on my prized possession played under telling me to dig my teeth in the soft milky sensation. But couldn't help but feel the smooth base and rugged top before I but this work of art into my stomach. I didn't my eyes I as I took a bite because I didn't want to totally miss the first majestic taste. Wonderful, magnificent, you could bite or wait until it melted in your mouth either way they definitely tickled my taste buds.
Yes, it is a guilty treat, but who can't resist a good Hershey bar!

--Latifah O

Anonymous said...

A cake like you have never tasted, The Peanut Butter Thing. With a soft mouth-watering Oreo top and peanut butter ice cream that melts in your mouth so smoothly, this is a cake from the heavens. With peanut butter cups that have smooth peanut butter and a hard crunchy chocolate shell this is a food made by God

-Ethan Tuttle

Anonymous said...

The girl brushed by me leaving a trail of a mixture of lavender and rose. I took a deep breath making sure not to forget it. She turned around subtly at the sound of my heels clicking as I walked towards her. Once I reached arms length away, I extended my arm up and ran the tips of my fingers through her hair. It felt as though it were soft strands of satin flowing in between the gaps of my fingers I left. Our eyes met and I found myself drowning. She leaped forward and embraced me in a hug. The warmth filled the coffe shop and drowned out all of the hustle and commotion. It drowned out the delectable smell of coffe, in which I could taste.it drowned out all the problems in the world.
-Shelby Guinard

Anonymous said...

I dove into a chewy, delectable chocolate covered cookie with a thin layer of gooey caramel beneath it. My taste buds danced, almost as if they depended on that one bite. As it traveled to my stomach, I dove for another bite of the delicious candy bar. Twix

Brittnee Goyette

Anonymous said...

The bear shaped lemon treat slowly entered the cave. When the cave closes shut the hanging rocks from above crush the small bear inside. Up and down, up and down my mouth goes until there is nothing left but the sweet memorie of the chewy, sweet, gummi-licious bear.-Shannon

Anonymous said...

The package of the sour patch kids crinkle as I pulled out the best flavor, the blue kind. As I layed it down on my tongue I was overcome by a sour sensation. I could feel each individual grain of sour sugar slowly dissolve on my tounge as the flavor subtlety changed sweet.
By Ethan Whipple

Anonymous said...

I gently pour the sizzling tiny candies out of the small paper package, and into the sea of taste buds that litter my tongue. They pop instantly as they make contact. When they explode it's as wonderful as watching fireworks in the cool night sky on July fourth. The taste of cherry awakens my entire mouth, as if the explosions weren't enough. The bursts are short, and soon my tongue is only left with a reminiscence of the event. This includes a vibrant red, temporary full tongue tattoo to prove so. ~Sarah A.

Anonymous said...

Colored little men danced in their plastic home, taunting me of their soury sweet taste. No longer could I take the pain. I tore into the sunlight yellow bag like and angry lion devouring its pray. Many little figures soar threw the pine refreshened room. I snatched a man, as blue as the ocean, out of the air. Ferociously I ripped the dis formed head of the sugary little man. When the head hit my tounge the sour taste hit me like a bullet. After the sour taste was gone the sweet sensation of the little man had come to me. I swallowed it satisfied.


Hailey

Anonymous said...

I pop one of the many colorful square sweets into my mouth savoring the moment wanting it to last for ever. And as fast I had started eating the starburst I have swallowed it. I glance down at the pile of wrapped candys next to me and I have a very strong urge to eat all of them at once, but I silence that urge and carefully pick up a red colored square, unwrap it and pop it into my mouth like the last one. It bursts in a juicy explosion filling my mouth with a thousand sweet tastes, and then like the last its gone. And then I eat another. And then another. And slowly over time the pile shrinks down to a group then a stack then to nothing. Even when I know all the sweet treats are gone I still extend my hand out to where a glorious mountain of treasures once stood. I frown and then procced to open the next pack.

-A completely original and made-up story by: Mike Clark

Anonymous said...

My army of white razors aligned in there positions.I lifted them up, inhaled the sour aroma of the green man drenched in sugar, then dropped the man landing him straight on my tongue. his skin melted at the mere touch of my mouth. My army then proceeded to plummet to the twin that sit below them. my tongue absorbed each and every bit of taste that rocketed through my mouth once the army chopped him in half leaving his insides ready to digest. Slowly, savoring every moment my body relaxed, then swallowed the man into a new adventure.

-ERIC CHRISTENSEN

Anonymous said...

The sugary piece of candy eroded on to my taste buds, leaving a trail of blueness, behind it. It was like an explosion of flavor in my mouth as i was eating the lollipop.

~ Connor V

Anonymous said...

I popped in the scrumptious m&m just as the little candy touched my tongue I could taste the hard but thin outer candy shell. There is no way to describe the taste of it, it is like pure heaven to me. As I crunched the hard candy shell, the smooth chocolate touched my taste buds with a taste that is unforgettable it is so good that, I shove almost the entire bag into my mouth.


~Thomas B

Anonymous said...

The gush and juicy rush inside busted all over my taste buds faster that lightning over sunset. The small drops of candy landing in my mouth making sure to suck out all of the juices inside before chewing on it. As i am eating this candy making sure that every "candy" had a special 's' on it. The good taste of this candy was really good but the only thing that made it really god was the name and that was skittles.

~ William Charest