Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Dialect

"Monstah" or "Monster"?  "Old Man" or "Father"?  What is the difference?  For Tucker and Anvil, it is a difference in dialect and gives us clues to their background.  What else can you tell about a character based on their dialect?

Type in the paragraph of dialect you wrote for homework.  Click "comment" below, type your paragraph, sign your name after your writing, click anonymous, and publish your comment.

65 comments:

Anonymous said...

"Do your fatha think that caa is weeyad or wicked awesome?" - Bostonian

Anonymous said...

"caaly lablenc! Geyt in tha caa!!!" caaly's dad yelled. Intaresting man..... "alriight dad!" caaly yelled back. "richnee! You too!!" iya hopped into tha caa and we both staated singing.... "heeya we come!!" caaly yelled out. We'ya on aar wayyy to Boston!!!!
-Richnie Pin

Anonymous said...

"Paak da caa" my Fatha used to always say mimiking the sourrounding Americans. "theay acksunts awe so weiad. I can barely understand them." Although we came to America 4 years ago, we still haven't gotten used to theyar silly phrases.

~ Johanna Hudson

Anonymous said...

My mom told me to get her caa ready because she was to busy. she towld me not to crash it or id be in big trowble. what ya know..... I crashed it. I was grownded foweva. Nick Giroux

Anonymous said...

Awrigh', fur stahtahs, I nevah wanted to haat nobudy. The bloke was asking' far it! The sleaze waas ulways goin' on 'boat sumthin! An' it ain't like yu nevah wanted nutin' more than to nawk sumbudies teeth rite outta dere heads. It'twas a weak swing with no baad intentions; nuttin morre. I wus runnin' on ahngah. It'twasn't moy fault!
-Olivia Kelley (:

Anonymous said...

"Don't foget to wash tha caa." Tyla yelled. I would wun inside to get some soap. "Whea you goin?" Tyla asked. "Goin in to get some soap." I say. "All ight." Tyla says. I come outside wid some soap and start washin tha caa. "Clean the tiyas too." Tyla yelled over the loud sound of tha hose. After tha wash, the caa was nice an bright. "Shua looks gweat." Tyla says, wit a smile. "Yep. Good foa tha yea hopefulley." I smile. We both walk inside, laughin and smilin. We both had a gweat daa, and I hope it happens again.

~Brianna (:

Anonymous said...

I was on me old Facebook when somethin' eer caught me eye. Cap'n Brianna sent me a message in o' bottle! It was yee ol' friends birthday today! Me ol' cap'n Gwyn uploaded her status 6 shot o' rum ago and I fancy this. I be eyein' Rascall flatts wit' pleasure. I take fancy to the ere' band. Me friend lailyn skewerd me! Must skewer' back! I write down waat be troublin' me and go to home port to abondon ship for the night!

~Jessie(:

Anonymous said...

"X-cuse me y'all but yous can't be blockin tha sidewalk" Olivia said to the group of people on the sidewalk. "Yo! Dawg wuts rong?" said her friend Molly. "These folks ar blockin' the sidewalk!" "I beg youor paadon miss?" said one of the people from the group on the sidewalk. "wells nun can get buy if yous arw crowdin the sidewalk." olivia said in outrage. " why, eye am deaply sory, we will leave."
Morgan

Anonymous said...

I had neyver thawt that mrs.tindalhawrts was to be tham culprit of tham all. I mean, to bay quite truthfal, I had neyver aven thawt that MR. Tindalhawrts wiz part'a dat too! Me an my usband were jus walkin round town when we saw dat owlds woman wit dat babey. I my coffaey wuz bout ta dribble down ma bib! thank goodnass thawt them Police Officars caught har. -Gabrielle Deschenes

Anonymous said...

As I walk into the bike shop the air conditioner cools the air making it freezing. Back at home we need one of these because it's hot in Texas. I go up to the employe and ask, "do ya guys have on o dem nice backs fur sale? The guy says ,"sure we do what kind do you want, we have mountain bikes, trick bikes, and racing bikes". " I'il take a look at em mountan backs".

By: Cole Archambeault

Anonymous said...

I stepped out to my backyard. We where having a cook out. While I was walking to a table, I noticed Tom speaking strange. "Hey y'all! Im about to eat dis pie!" I had no idea why he would be speaking like this. He scared down the pie. "Wooie! That was great!" I've never seen him like this before. So I asked, "What are you speaking?" "Words." Tom replyed. "No no no, how your speaking your words." "Dialect, It's somthing that make you speak funny."
I understood. And he came back to the same dialect. Everyone at the table laughed.


-James Hays

Anonymous said...

Oh my name ees rose i was woundereeng eef you would leke to guu to lounch,oh yees i would luvee to gu out to lonch with you.guud what ees your name?oh my name ees emile.well guud bye rose,seee you suun

Emily rice

Anonymous said...

You arr da biggest hillbilly I ever seen! All yer do is sit aroundi yours fancy Carr thang and use dat radio of urrs. When urrs sit in dat arr conditioning to cool yerrrself off. Bak when i wers beern us had nons of dat eletricity, alls we had was rrr toys and rrrrr freeeends. I just wish dey neva made dees caaaaa thangs. -Phil D.

Anonymous said...

"Heh Kaylaaan!," says my great aunt. "Y'all fine-lay came ta Indianna." "Hi Aunt C," I say calmly. "Why aren't ya gettin big Kaylaaan." As I put down my bag, she trots over and gives me a huge hug. "Ma goshh! How oed aa ya na?" I quietly say, "Ten," because she was squishing my face. "Ya duble dijets na! Wale, thaatz amazen. Seems liek just yestaday, I wuz feeden ya a batel."

Kaylyn

Anonymous said...

I wuz practicing for my horse race, while all the others are running a mile fowr 20 minutes I'm out therr riding fowr howrs. Meanwhile therr wuz a ring on my cell phone, I pict it up. It wuz my my family from Ohio. Grammie Sue wuz on the line first, "Howl y'all doing' up therr?" she asked. I said, "everything's fine and good, How are you guys doing down in Ohio?" I said. She said "Good, how is yur dance and horse riding lessons doin'?" "Better than ever." I said.

-Erin

Anonymous said...

You arr da biggest hillbilly I ever seen! All yer do is sit aroundi yours fancy Carr thang and use dat radio of urrs. When urrs sit in dat arr conditioning to cool yerrrself off. Bak when i wers beern us had nons of dat eletricity, alls we had was rrr toys and rrrrr freeeends. I just wish dey neva made dees caaaaa thangs. -Phil G.

Anonymous said...

One day when I was in Disneyworld, I asked my mum if I could get a sucker(lollipop), as my treat. I was on a ride, I had forgotten that I had my sunglasses on, so when we got done the ride I had asked my father if he had them, he said no. As the day had past my family and I had grew hungry and thirsty so we got food and a pop(soda). When we were done our supper, I still had part of my pop(soda). My bother asked my mum if he could get a sucker(lollipop).
-Cailey Powell

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Anonymous said...

"Ma'am hower much fora thist 'ere paintins?" My mother stood stock still. "Ma'am." He said again. "Twou Silvs" I said, knowin' Ma wouln't spond to the man.
"Very quick on yer feet there ain't cha. S'pose 'm justa prob'em solva" I said. He 'anded ova the silvs. "G'day" I said. "May'bs I ain't done shoppin' ". " I said a G'day to ya". He looked confuzzed. " I said G'day"


Joe Rager....Flap.Flap Flap

Anonymous said...

It was about one hundred years since the ice became water. Everyone is trying to get their hands on some food. "I hungry! Jacob go hunt!" I mutter to myself in the cave. I spot a rabbit running int the high grass. I clasp my spear and start lking the animal. As soon as the rabbit stops, I grab my spear and though it tords it. I was maybe a foot away from hitting the rabbit, but it ran off into the trees. I come back to the cave with nothing to eat. That day I had nothing but some barries I had found while hunting. I hope the hunting will be better tomorrow, that is if I survive the night.

-Jacob T. Penniman

Anonymous said...

Wonce apon a time there was a gil whith skin as wought as snow and haair as balck as nought, witch fit heer naime foor it was snow wought snow was the prit-ious gil alive. I will have to bring thaat gil down if I want to be recognized.
-aimee

Anonymous said...

The mounties are ova the hill aih! Do you wanna go home aih? I don't know aih. Watch out, the wile moose aih!! Get outta the way aih! The moose hit me aih!! The end, aih!
John Maher

Anonymous said...

"hunny, gat in the caa," my faatha told my mama. "looocy, taaaam. Last chance, aww you comeing?" mamma yelled. We sprinted down the staias and I tripped, thankfully taam caaught me. We gat theya just in of time as my faatha staated the engin and locked the doowaa.we drove off in the caa and almost got hit by a caa that belonged to the one andonly mr.jackson. Fathaa slamed on his braakes and Mr.Jackson just kept on driving. fathaa yelled some curse woards i rather not repete, because they aww quite ruud! maa told fathaanot to cursein front of us.thatmade him ratha mad. finally we gat to auntie loo's house and we all gatout of thecar. auntie loo burrned maama favorite dish andguess who was cursing now, that made fathaa mada thanmad he had himself aliitle fit. then auntie loo told 'um all to be quite or gat out.
-sarah b

Anonymous said...

You arr da biggest hillbilly I ever seen! All yer do is sit aroundi yours fancy Carr thang and use dat radio of urrs. When urrs sit in dat arr conditioning to cool yerrrself off. Bak when i wers beern us had nons of dat eletricity, alls we had was rrr toys and rrrrr freeeends. I just wish dey neva made dees caaaaa thangs. Phil D.

Anonymous said...

" Oh mai. Gawd, did you like see that guy, he was so like ugly like! Omg, I like totally agree! totally oh mai gawd like! He was so ugly like ttttttttooooooootttttttaazaaalllllllyyyyyyy sssssssssssssssooooooooooooooo rude too. Like, yeah totally! Oh em gee! Like."

Zack. -_-

Anonymous said...

My mum and me were heading to the super market when she told me she got sacked from her job. I became so off my trolley that I started slaggeeing at her really obnoxiously,that when I was finished my tantrum she said "April fools cheeky". I was so gutted from what she said I started honking.
Judith Schafer

Anonymous said...

"Oi! Be ca'ful wit' that! That painting cost me five 'undred pounds!" A short man in a suit was yelling at one of his crew. "An' you there, be mighty ca'ful wit' that piece! 'onestly, ya think that ne of yehs would know 'ow to move a couple o' pieces o' furniture! All of yehs, git outta 'ere! Go on, git!". Maxine

Anonymous said...

Duce- "Yello babra! whuts up wit eww?"

Barbra-"Nuttin' much; how bout you?"

Duce-"I'm always up to sumpin', Barbs! Har,Har,Har,Har!

Barbra-"Ya,ooookkkaayy ttthhaaannn..."

Duce-" Whuts that posed too meen!?

Barbra-.................

Shealeigh Blood

Anonymous said...

As i thigh the king of soccer showll not lose for thigh showll face a grate death. But if i though win i showll inherate the power of eight men. Boooom! Not though im all fired up lets have a penilty kick. Kick! As though watch in exitement the ball had hit the goally smack dab in the stomack. And i showll now have the the power of eight men.

THOUGH SHOULD NOT SCORE.

DONT SHOOT TILL YOU SEE THE WHITES OF THE GOALYS EYES.
Phillip gosselin

Anonymous said...

"howdy y'all,I'm Marissa amd I'll be y'alls waitress for taday.Alrightee, whut can i start ya off with?" " hmm can i have a bottle of cola paaleeze?" said the girl. " you sure ken!" said Marissa. " and a cola for y'alls?" she said. " nawh." said the man. " we don't want no colas, wull have sumetin else."
Rylee McHugh

Anonymous said...

I reckon I ain't one for talkin' much 'bout my life. But I thought it ought to be a dang good time. My name is Jeffrey Stought, but ever'body calls me Jeff. Guess the name just stuck ones the first person called me that. I'd really rather be called Jeffrey though. Sure, I guess I got a dream like ever'body else. It's ta get outta here, this southern state, and into the outer doors. Fresh air all 'round. Aaaaahh. . . . That'd really be somethin'. But I'm still stuck here with my daddy and ma. But I don't mind. They're somethin' I tell ya. No way ta describe 'em, but they sure are somethin'. I'm in highschool right now; nothin' too excitin' goin' on. But i gotta good group a friends. They just like me. Fun, but not too bright. Guess that's all fer my life. I reckon I ought to go now.
-Jennifer Mitchell

Anonymous said...

As I entahed ze howze, I noteeced a couple of chaingez zat my fahmily had made. "Everything is all nice and clean," she zaid, "and I reorganized a bunch of things!" My wife had beeen ahnnoyed aht the untidy cundeetions that owa home had beeen enduureeng. "Thahnk you, my beauteeful wife," I said. I thein hooged hehr and proceeded weeth my day, happy weeth ze changez to ze howze. -Arnold Schwartzeneggar (By Mitchell Hollis)

Anonymous said...

"Whad'a ya wanna do today?" says Johnny. "I dont know mon." says Bob in an unintrested vocie. "Ohhhh I know what'a do Bob.... Lets go fishin at Pump Lake." Says Johnny. "Well mon that sounds like it would be a blast." He says smiling at Johnny. So both of the kids walk down to the lake withe their fishing rods. " Wow mon look at this big one" Holding up the huge 23 inch fish. " Holy trousers." Johnny says as he stares at the fish.

By: Mitchell Kilroy. :D

Anonymous said...

Amon, come on down to Jamica mon where the weather is good and the people are very nice mon. You have to. Try the famous Jamican smoothie mon. What would you rather be doing right now, swimming in the warmest weather ever mon or shoveling snow in New England mon? I know what I what do mon come down today!
-Ben Cumming

Anonymous said...

Hay yall hows u doen wanna gow gettcha some ice creeam. I know a place i take yu cus u aint from these parts. Well lets geet her goen to richaards -Ron

Anonymous said...

Long ago there was one family from generation to generation that lived in the haunted Baldwin house. This house was in a one horse town (pretty small town). For many years no harm had eva (ever) come to their home. Not until one nawt (night) they heard a vase of glayus (glass) shadda (shadder) the floor. Slowly the family began to geyt (get) up. Once the father had gradually gotten out of bed the floor shifted back and forth. They ya'll (all) had heard of the story of the ghost Marry that had haunted this house years before they lived here. The ghost Marry was believed to have long rope like heya (hair) that could wrap around you and tangle you up in her curse. The whole family was frightened that the ghost had came to haunt the house afta (after) so many years. As they all stood silent in the hallway the mother said "in all my born days, I haven't heard sucha thin" (not in my entire life has she ever had this happen to her.) They began to search the house trying to figure out what happened. Next thing you know the daughter was missing......?

Elizabeth Abare

Anonymous said...

Y'all should respect your elders, cuzz one day i wont help you with them nicknacks you bother me with! No go on, git! Its my nap time. Wake me up at sunset.



Danny

Anonymous said...

As i get in the kah leaving the red sox game i see flashing and people being taken out in hand cuffs. My brotha is scared Police kahs everywhere. On the way home we drive past the train station and the gaaden. when it is time to get out of the kah i am almost fall asleep
-kailyn dinan

Anonymous said...

Im hunting moose eh! Im goin to bring me home a nice big moose eh! My house is about amile away so i better start walking eh! Like a boss eh! By trevor keohane! eh !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rachel said...

Livin in Boston is hard. when there ah a lot of kahs everywhere. They have A lot of collages. Going to Havid Yahd is a nice place to be. Goin into Southy is scary, but fun. People al ova the streets, crashin and bumpin eachotha. They Celtics an Bruin games attract a lot of people. Fenway Pak has the baseball games. People love to com an see the Red Sox. Boston is amazin but frightening at night. People love goin into Boston to walk around and go shoppin. Lots of gangs and dangerous people in the city. Boston is amazin and attracts tons of people. There's plenty to do there. Boston has statues and monuments that people com to see. There's plenty to do here! Come on down to the capital of Massachusetts. The city of Boston.

Amber said...

After looking at the stables i see cattle i say running over to see them i get stopped by a man what are you doing he says i reply looking at your cattle he says i dont think run along little missy as i walked back being pushed out the stables i blurt out hopefully "yall know what ya doin rounding up them cattle" i shout out! Withbthe most snide remark he says what do you know about them cattle? Your just a horse instructor. I may be a horse instructor but i know how to round cattle i said with a digusted voice didnt yall mamas tell you to shut your traps. Where im from you dont go dissing a missy where im from or thats a big mistake. I have a few tricks up my sleave i say proudly. Hya wow nelly easy there now yehaw now thats how you do it partner!

Annica Scott said...

I'm at Fenway Pak, in Bowston! The Red Sox ah winnin five to nuthin. I'm just enjoyin ma hawt dog an drinkin my diet coke. Afta da game my friends an i ah goin out to dinna in ma caar to get some hamburgas. Than lata on we ah all gunna get some ice cream an candy. So much candy that we ah gunna stay up all night.

~Jordan Barrett~

Anonymous said...

Yall lisen 'er now! 'ome on! I gonner tell yall a story! got it? Lil bessie, come sit on meh lap foe' lil bit hun...when i was a lil runt like ewe awol, i had me a nice baby cow. O was she a beauty! 'ow 'er lil itty bitty chicken legs 'ood BARELY CARRY 'ER! O owe i miss 'er...we called 'er marybeth-afta meh mudders mudder. She was a nice fella too...anyway...ey! Ey! 'Omas...'ae ewe been listenin to meh story now? Eh!??! Oe ewe kids...when i was a little feller i 'espected meh elders! Oos been teachin ewe kids? Christ jesus i say your name in grace 'elp meh ou' 'own ere wit dese clueless, 'ad of aehn excuse fo' well mannered 'ilden!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Now 'nouf 'tory 'ellin foe now aint that rite yall? Lets eat!

Olivia Welch

Anonymous said...

It was a dahk and stoimy night at Yankee Stadium. It was the bottom a the ninth an' the Sox had a three run awn the Yankees. The foist three gat up to bat and awll hit singles. Then this real beefy guy stepped up ta the plate. We knew it was awll ovah foa the Sox. Foist pitch fowls owf in left field and then the second pitch amazes us awll. He hit tha bawll straight at of pahk fo' an unbulievable grand slam. It was the woist night evah!


Shayne

Anonymous said...

There aint gonna be one a'them fancy trucks pasin through thes parts any time soon. I hope know 'at. Youd best skedattle bofore them towns folk come fo' yee and drive yee outa here.

Steven Hoffmann

Anonymous said...

Ello chaps! Today we are goien to England. On the way there theryrl be some classlike (cool) carhs! So keap yourh eiyes opean because theyre Insane! Ohh miy looky at that woen!!!!!!!!!!





Cameroooooon Sicard

Anonymous said...

I am from canada ah i am going to hunt some deer. I take my rifle and go shot something ah. After i go shot i am going to the canucks hockey game ah. They are going to win the stanley cup ah. I see a deer and i shot, i got him hahahahah and now i am going home to cook the deer ah. Wait the game is on forget the deer turn the tv on ah.

Luke Pajari

Anonymous said...

How y'all doin on this fine mornin? Joey asked. "We doin just fine, hows bout you?" the crowd replied. "I'm just dandy. What's on the agenda for today?" "Well first we gonna wrestle up ourselves some grub, ghen we gonna go plowin through the fields." said sally, the group leader. "That darlin; dunsound like a good idea." After breakfeast Joeysaid "Let's wash them their plates and go get started." Sally said. "I reckin that's a good idea." And the group started cleanin.
Julia

Anonymous said...

"how y'all doin, it's been awile." my cousin marrisa said. "very well thank you. hows life down south?" I asked. "well ya know it's a lot hotter than here. I dont know how y'all survive in this cold weather." she replyed. "hahaha we are new englanders we're tough" I said. "got that right how bout we go outside ." she said. " ok lets go y'all." I replyed in a mocking tone. Then she beat me up.
-the one and only tristan deschenes

Anonymous said...

"Hey Noah whats up?" I say. "Nottrnm much," He says. "You be wake eneff for game time right? Cause weed gonna need you." Noah then says," Yea I'll be Good, weerr goona smoke em tonight." "Yea boy I gonna like drain ten threes in that kids lil face." "We both gotta have monsta games tuday." I say.
Calvin Whipple

Anonymous said...

Eh! How it doin' in them deir states eh? I can't go a day without my Timmy Hortons coffee eh! How about them baseball stars eh?! Eny' fun bien low on ya' snow eh? Ain't a good ol' round A' Canadian hospitality nice eh?!

By Brandon Wyson

Anonymous said...

Howdy Yall!
My name is Sally!First I should start with tellin youmsomethin bout me, well i've got a son named Billey an Ii recond I see him once evry blue moon.Sometimes he is as mean as a snake, but I ain't care I am as proud as a muel over him. I am always complaining to him bout pullin up dem draws of his. In a month of sundays he does manage some good in im. I recond it bothers me though when he flatt plants his gurl right in my own dang living room.on occanisions I make him some scrumptious cheese with milk from the barn cows.
Rebecca Van Ells

Anonymous said...

" 'Ow long?" "Seven Hours Sherlock." "I can work with that. Now 'e seems to 'ave 'ad a 'ealthy relationship. You see 'e kept 'is wedding band clean. Now you can tell by the marks on the back of 'is legs that 'e was dragging along a case. Which means 'e must 'ave been a tourist come to visit good ol' London. Anyone 'ere find the suitcase? No? Well go find it! Now! Let's see, 'Rachel' why would this man carve the name Rachel with 'is life about to leave 'im? Who is she? A wife, a daughter? Maybe a niece? Find 'er and the case and get back to me! I'm leaving now. Come on Watson."

The detective stopped me before I could follow him out.

"Wait, Watson. How can we be sure he's right?"
"Sherlock Holmes is always right."

--Sarah~

Anonymous said...

"" Dude! "" We all had the best vacation ever. Homy, homy and I had the bestest blast of all. We all were kickin around and watching the best horror movie of all. "" Homy! "" Lets all sitvaround and drive the lawn mower. Thats what all me and those friends did outside in the warmest day of April. Eddie, Brad and I had sommuch fun that dy that wecould never quit are fun. -Thomas

Anonymous said...

Sup' mon! Come to Jamica'mon! You can listen to us play music on the street'mon! You can rent jet skies and have them for the day and drive them in the nice clear water'mon!
Dont be afraid to say hi'mon because people here are very friendly'mon! My favorite thing to do on vacation is to climb Dones River Falls'mon! You climb this steep river that has water trying to sweep you down'mon! I love the thrill'mon! So come on down and relax with a nice Jamican smothie'mon!!! -Peter Fitzgerald

Anonymous said...

"G'Day mate" as the man said to me as I walkedoff the plane. "G'Day Bluey! Could ya lead me in the right direction to the Beanfeast?" "Just go out those doors and ask the bloke by the pub where the closest walkabout is, and follow it to the big smoke. Careful not to talk to wombats or hongs. They may try to mug ya!" "Ta-tar and hooroo." So I started my walk about down the road and decided to stop at the dunny. Then I had a go at a meal and drink. I finally made it to the Beanfeast and checked into the local homestand.

Kylie

Anonymous said...

I wolked through the buisy streets, bein bumped and tased around. Baston wos the most buisyest place ive ever been. Wolking an my wat to Havad, for bein hea for 2 yeas you would think i wouldnt forget my way. But bein surrounded by people youve neva seen can be scary and pretty costofobic. Once makin it there i saw myi friends and knew that Havad wos probably the best choice ive evea made.
Claudia larochelle

Anonymous said...

I entered the restarant and was greeted by some people. "gooday mate!" one man said. "Taday our special will be a shrimp on the bahbay, but if your planing to drink tonight go easay on it." he said. "Most people are a hair of a dog tonight." On man yelled 'ooroo,' as he was walking out thee door. I figured i was just checkin and me as well said "ooroo" when i was leaving. -Tim Osgood

Anonymous said...

There was a British family so they go out to watch a movie the father said "two tickets palees for the Malle cop" . So when they walked in they went to the snack counter " can I have some sowda palees". Then once they got in to the movie the kid was like" this moviee theartar is huuge. They thought the movie was great then they went out for dinner the kid gave his order "can I havee some chickan fingars.
Isaya

Anonymous said...

Ellow mate I just wanted to tahk about the aksints for a little because peoplesay i have a relay ozzy aksint nd i cannt tell.But i hate how amricons say oregono nd we say oragoneo.They also say austraila nd we say astrala.another thing they say is alominum.(i dont get it)We say alaminiam but i love Amricanns aksints


Caitlyn

Anonymous said...

"Yo! Whad up homi!" J-rob said to rabit. Rabit replyed "what's popin dudee, did ya jump the car yet? J-rob shook his head in the driection were the ride is. They headed to a lot with a huge fence suroning it. The fence was no challange at all and they both easly cimbed over the fence with a lock pick in one hand. Right when they steped on the ground a alarm when of! Rabit called out "jump the fence and run!" The next second they were both tased.

Scott Miller

Anonymous said...

Fer some reason I took ta layin' in the middle o' the wrestlin' mat,thinkin' on how my baby sister might be killed in a week er so, an' hearin' Falcon dust off 'is hands on 'is pants when 'e got down from the handgrips.
"Ya wanna do a round on the bench, Wess? I'll spotchya."
"Sure, I s'pose," I sa-id, gitten hold o' the bar an' tellin' myself,
All we gotta do is push ohn. River'll wake up scremin' frum a dream, an' we'll be back home with th' fellas in the outpost. Everythin' 'll okay.

-Celia W

Anonymous said...

Yo, i aint neva seen stuff like dat go down befoe. And i bet yal aint neda seen seen it befoe eider. Yo it was so fresh i got chills, it was so ill i felt sick. That stuff was cra'. Yo ill neda foget dat.....you knoo wha im sain bra

Sam

Anonymous said...

"Dude ya comin ova lata?" I said to my boy. We could prob jus play video games lata. But we prob are gunna jus watch tv like usual. I called him again, I said "Yo dawg ya comin over?" He said " Dude I'll be dare in a bit, few streets ova" and I smiled.

-Gwynevere(:

Anonymous said...

I wuz thinkin bout this stori that I wuz told when wuz litlle . It wuz bout this gurl and how she wuz stuck up in a bigg olld tawer. And her mumma wuz a mean olld weitch. Then one nite she scaped and ran away from hur mean olld mumma. But inn the end she got cawt.
A Southern Accent
By Emily Deschamps